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Swamplands in the Iroquois National Wildlife Refuge.

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August 17, 2010
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902×644
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Make
Hewlett-Packard
Model
HP PhotoSmart R607 (V01.00)
Shutter Speed
1/224 second
Aperture
F/2.6
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
102
Date Taken
July 18, 2010
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:iconrushingtide:
This is a great basis to what can become a better photo. The shadows coming in through the trees are wonderful, nice and elongated on the swampland. Honestly I thought the swamp was a floor!

Some suggestions would be to kneel down on the ground and think in terms of rule-of-thirds. Compose the shot in the frame of your camera. Imagine this photo was divided three ways, and think of how you would compose it, where would the focus be, where is my line of sight going. For example, I would make sure that the tree on the right hand side of the frame was either gone or on the very edge of the photo. I would also kneel down onto the ground and possibly pick up more of the light that's creating the shadows in this photo. That way there's an angle in the light in the photo, coming from the upper left hand corner of the shot to the bottom right. My eye can follow something.

Unfortunately with a camera like this you can't do too much. It's all about how much light can be absorbed into your lens, and most compact cameras don't have such features where you can manually fix your aperture and shutter speed. Some do, and I saw in your comment you were going to invest in a new camera. There's some good compacts, or you can go ahead and invest in a good beginner SLR and stock up on lenses. The more practicing with composition, the better. :D
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:iconrushingtide:
Also, DOH, OF COURSE YOU'D KNOW RULE OF THIRDS. I'm a moron. XD
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*alapip Aug 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
what will the warming do to this beauty?

pip
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:iconpearwood:
=pearwood Aug 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
To smell the sun-rippled damp.
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:iconjamberry-song:
*jamberry-song Aug 18, 2010  Professional General Artist
Beautifully poetic. :)
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:iconpearwood:
=pearwood Aug 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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:iconcszemis:
~Cszemis Aug 17, 2010  Student Writer
Woah that is so cool
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:iconlancelotprice:
A bayou for very small environment-friendly steamboats. [current obsession of mine]
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